Thursday, May 17, 2012

Blog 11


My weaknesses are:
·         Giving strong examples besides personal
·         Really knowing how to develop each paragraph
·         Grammar and misspelling
·         Clearly reading through the directions carefully

If truly am going to pass this exam, I must work on these errors. I must re-read my essay to check on any missing details or misspelling words. I must also check on if I have an introduction, 3 strong paragraphs and a good closing conclusion. i must read carefully the directions and see whats asked me to write. if i have any worries or start to blank out, i can free write on the side. just so ill be able to warm up my brain and my thoughts start to flow on paper.

Thursday, May 10, 2012

Bolg 7: CATW Practice 2

           Individuals that are in groups, tend to think and act a certain way differently when they are by them selves. when people observe or have seen an accident, they're actions respond in a heroic way.like they give they're life to save another. As apposed to when in a crowd, they hold back on being heroic. To see who will take that risk first. According to the Article "individualism in groups" by Carol Travis, i agree when she states    "Something happens to individuals when they are in a group".
           In the Article, they conducted an experiment. the purpose of this experiment was to study the behavior of students in a staged emergency. they put a groups of  three in one room and those on their own in another room. An incident occurred when smoke began to pour out of the vents. Students that were left on their own, immediately hesitated, went to check on the vents and and it was reported to be what seem like a fire. On the other hand, those that were in groups did not move to check the incident. They sat there for about six minutes with heavy smoke that they could barely see.
          An example would be from the movie "a walk to remember". A young lady diagnosed with leukemia, fall for a young guy with a bad reputation. He was associated in a group of popular kids who all they new was to bad. Once the young guy hooks up with this girl, he realizes that hes different. He start to see that he is this sweet guy and how he wants to better his life. That the group that he was in wasn't going to bring him any good.
        

Thursday, May 3, 2012

Blog 10: CAT Practice 3


                It has been said how the order of your birth reflects on your life adjustment. Whether it may be you’re an only child, the oldest or the youngest, there’s certain attitudes one must portray in the family. According with the passage “How your birth order influences your life adjustment” by Lucille Forer, I agree when she states “an important part of his identity is his family position”.
                When you’re the oldest, the parents usually expect the child to be more capable and more responsible. The oldest grows up in the sense that he/or she must play a this role for the youngest siblings. Opposed to the middle child, may think of itself to be able to do things belter because of the capability it has above his siblings. But yet sometimes, they will run to an older sibling or parents for help. So they know there able to obtain for help when needed. And as the youngest, well they know they can be always taking care of. In the opposite side, an only child must always think that even though the parents may not always be around, they must be more independent. They must learn things without the assistance of others.
                An example would be from the book “the color of water” in the story talks about how the oldest sibling growing up in a black/white family, had to be a father figure to its siblings. After he’s father dying, he had to take the responsibility in taking care of the family. Him wanting to have a normal childhood, he had to assist his mother when not present to do father figure activities. He was seen as a role model even though he didn’t want to take a responsibility so huge. But because he was the oldest, that choice was never given.
                Another example was from the movie “beastly”. This young man was an only child. Instead of growing up with responsibilities, he had it all. Young rich but yet cruelled at heart due to his father never truly paying attention to him. Because he had a cruel heart, a curse was put on him. He had one year to find love. Once he was able to find love, the curse was lifted and he changed for the better image for himself.
                One last example would be a personal one of myself. I am the oldest here in the U.S. I grew up to mature for my age. I missed out a lot in my childhood by taking care of my little sibling. At the time when my parents didn’t see eye to eye, I had to give a mother figure role. My mother told me to do everything and always counted on me to take for my sibling. There was no room for mistakes. Independent I was because I was the oldest. I grew up thinking my identity was to be a mother figure and not a child growing up into an adult.
                The order you are in a family places the child a specific task that needs to be played. It makes a child to develop certain attitudes/ behaviors towards people and most of all to itself.

Thursday, April 19, 2012

Blog 8: Revise CATW Practice 1

          Researcher's have proven that music has a deep affection on our bodies and mind. It's not a surprise that music has affected us in so many powerful ways. I agree that "Music and Music Therapy can also be used to bring a more positive state of mind, helping to keep depression and anxiety under control".
         In the article " Is music a good tool for health" written by Elizabeth Scott, describes the great use music has in our lives. Music has been a major help in the medical field. They have named this practice " Music Therapy". This Consist in using music o help heal those with medical problems. Hospitals have started using music therapy to help with pain, depression, advance movement, ease muscle tension, and other advantages. When listening to faster beats it give us a sharper and more alert thought. As opposed to slower beats which gives us a more calm, soothing deep concentration.
         For example, playing the alto saxophone eases my stress. It's my music therapy every time I'm overwhelmed and in deep thought. When i play it, my worries tend to flow out of the saxophone creating this beautiful melody. Like this huge burden has been lifted off my shoulder and I'm more at ease. Nevertheless, I'm more positive in any situation I encounter.
            Many people like to listen to music when they are nerves and depression. Music therapy has been a great use for depression sufferers. It gives them a way to express they're feelings through a song or instrument.
           This is why music and music therapy can help taking place of chronic stress, not only to relax but also health. This can be used to have a more positive mind, keep depression and anxiety under control.

Thursday, April 5, 2012

Blog 6: CATW

         Researcher's had proven that music has a deep affection on our bodies and mind. It's not a surprise that music has affected us in so many powerful ways.
         In the article " Is music a good tool for health" written by Elizabeth Scott, describes the great use music has in our lives. Music has been a major help in the medical field. They have named this practice " Music Therapy". This Consist in using music o help heal those with medical problems. Hospitals have started using music therapy to help with pain, depression, advance movement, ease muscle tension, and other advantages. When listening to faster beats it give us a sharper and more alert thought. As opposed to slower beats which gives us a more calm, soothing deep concentration.
         For example, playing the alto saxophone eases my stress. It's my music therapy every time I'm overwhelmed and in deep thought. When i play it, my worries tend to flow out of the saxophone creating this beautiful melody.
         This is why music and music therapy can help taking place of chronic stress, not only to relax but also health. This can be used to have a more positive mind, keep depression and anxiety under control.

Thursday, March 29, 2012

Blog 5: "Historical and Personal Illusions"

         Before i was in the cave of religion but once i saw the light my whole world change in an instanced.  Since a child, i grew in a religious background and  always believed in God. I was so into the concept of church and its rules. At first i followed everything it was asked of me at the church. the perfect image is what i had to portrait. All that changed when i felt i was going against Gods will by being a lesbian.
        When i knew i loved women scared me at first because i was terrified of the consequences of not only by God but my family. like my reputation was going to changed because of this. I still believe in God but i don't just don't follow he's wishes. The church i was attending to with my family kicked me out of the choir because of what i was doing was damnation.
        What the church said goes. there was no if or buts to the situation. so rebelled against it. i knew what i was doing in loving women wasn't right in God's eyes. but i couldn't be a conformist. i had to do what i believe was right for me even if i was rejected by others. My parents resented me at first because they thought how can their loving daughter become like this way. I always had to look up to my parents expectations and never mess up they're reputation. As i got older the fear that i had of rebelling was long gone. i had to make my self happy and no others. The Church still see that I'm wrong and that how will change for they're sake. but no i refuse! what ever i do with my life will only be the judgement of God.

Thursday, March 22, 2012

Blog 4: The Allegory of the Cave

     Let me paint you a picture of how our race is in the light or in the dark. We've been captive in own beliefs due to the imagine we've been portrait as a child. We chose to either been enlightened or unenlightened.
     In the story of "the Cave of the Allegory" written by Plato, tells us how one mans journey towards the light. Being in the shadows of a cave. Imprisoned to what he thought was true. He took the risk into coming out of the darkness and walking toward this bright light. Once out of this darkness, he was in shocked of what he saw. After so many years, he belief became different to the change. At first he refused to accept the truth until he saw every living proof.